Rough cut review/feedback

This is obviously very unfinished so feedback from other students was a lot of what i knew i was already putting in such as needing to add the sound more interviews and voice overs.
Feedback
-Use less explicit music making this have a wider audience.
-make better use out of the titles
- Refilm the interview due to crackly sound, out of focus shots.
- Film more Clips as Crepe city 12 on saturday the 8th to get the full footage